I commented in parentheses throughout the profiles below what I thought of them and why: I gave this profile a passing grade because while it’s not great, nothing about it makes it terrible.“I have been in the ——- area for a few years now and always looking to meet new people. I enjoy meeting new people and going to new places.But if she likes what she’s seeing, she’ll keep reading – and more importantly, she’ll be way more likely to respond to your message.Open with an exciting travel story or a humorous anecdote that hints at your personality.If you know how to and are able to communicate through your dating profile that you are not just another average girl, it will significantly increase your chances of meeting better and more interesting men online.Struggling to write a dating profile that gets results? Most guys find it difficult or frustrating to write about themselves, so taking the easy route with a two-liner like this can be pretty tempting: However, if you’re looking for the total package, a short, boring profile like this isn’t going to cut it.It consists a number of thought provoking statements right from the beginning that show a woman’s great personality and sense of humor.It’s eloquently written, it’s concise, straight and to the point!
You want to highlight your most attractive traits, but you want to do it in a way that keeps her attention and sets you apart from the competition.The above example is written for a site like Match.com, where longer profiles are the norm.For online dating sites, a good rule of thumb is keep the length of your profile down to about 300 words or less.Remember, quality single guys that you are looking to meet are more picky than others.Many of them are looking for a special connection with a special woman.She doesn’t have time to read a novel, and you want to leave her wanting more.If you fail to do either of those two things, she’s instantly moving on to the next guy.The more attractive the woman, the fiercer the competition.You can’t step into the octagon with a B-team profile if you want to score dates with top quality women.(This first sentence says nothing eye-catching about the woman and is very bland, and boring). (still, nothing thought provoking or attractive) I am very spontaneous and I love the outdoors, watching movies, dancing, and traveling. (Finally something somewhat interesting that she says about herself).(Another cliché statement that is being used by thousands of other women) A great date can be staying at home with a movie and popcorn, or a night on the town. I made myself a promise a few years ago to take a vacation somewhere new, out of state, every year. Well, that is a little about me if you are interested say hello and we will chat. ” *********************** This profile gets a higher grade because it reflects on the writer’s character and her personality.